In an instant, the banquet became very lively. The three poems of Zhang Longxiang and Marquis Lumen were presented, each more exciting than the last. Each poem seemed to be telling the story between Zhang Longxiang and Marquis Lumen, and even the King Of Chu, which aroused the interest of everyone present.
"Zhang Longxiang, this boy, has been in prison for ten years. It's a blessing in disguise."
"Just by looking at these three poems, this person doesn't seem to be a rebel."
"A few days ago, I heard from a friend in Jingzhou that he taught his son well. The dean of Zhurong Academy personally wrote a biography for him. I just thought it was a joke. Today, after listening to these three poems, I know that he is a great talent."
"Good preparation, grinding bricks into mirrors. Ten years of training is not in vain."
"But … his third poem is too ruthless. It points at Marquis Lumen's nose and scolds him for not caring about the lives of the soldiers. What will the soldiers think?"
"I suspect that Zhang Longxiang's three poems have been brewing for many years. The connection between these three poems is really wonderful. The first one is a head-on call, 'When will the East River Song and Dance Stop'. It is straightforward and pointed out the shortcomings of the Lumen Army, causing everyone to criticize it. But the next one is' The Second Lumen Army '. It uses the phrase,' I dare not forget my country 'to shut everyone's mouth. At this time, everyone is completely convinced by him. After all, he is the Marquis of Zhujiang and the Hanlin Academy. Even the commoners can talk about national affairs. What does it mean for the great Marquis of Zhujiang to ridicule' Ganzhou is Liuzhou '? "
Another person continued, "The wonderful thing is that after he convinced us with the phrase, 'I dare not forget my country', he inserted his own affairs into it and asked us to make the final judgment. Since we believed his first sentence, we naturally have a certain degree of approval for the second sentence. And in 'The Second Lumen Army', he first wrote that he was sick and lonely. Then, he wrote that he hoped for the protection of the saints and the restoration of the country. His true feelings are revealed, making people sympathize with him. "
"As for 'The Second Lumen Army', it echoes the first poem and points at Marquis Lumen. This is a general against general. On the contrary, it made people admire his courage. The phrase 'A general's success is built on the bones of a thousand men' could truly be said to be a rare and beautiful phrase, and it was filled with sorrow and sorrow. I don't know how Marquis Lumen would respond to such a series of questions. If it were me, I could only remain silent. "
"However, Zhang Longxiang's three poems are too extreme and far from the Confucian Sage Path. I'm afraid he will be criticized by the scholars."
"Indeed, these three poems. There are flaws in the way of a gentleman's golden mean. "
"Poetry Addict Old Man also mentioned the flaws in the poem, which is why it needs to be passed down for years before it can be promoted to Guardian State."
"If that's the case, the Kong Shengwen World is still inferior to the Saint Origin World. Even if he can't be compared to Fang Xusheng, there is still a gap between him and a famous poet who is famous for his poetry. "
"Perhaps after a few more years, his state of mind will gradually calm down and he will be able to let go of his gains and losses. Then, he will be able to take another step forward."
"But does he still have time?"
For a moment. The scholars of Ganzhou sighed one after another. They all knew that if there was no miracle, Zhang Longxiang would inevitably die young.
Suddenly, Marquis Lumen sighed and said, "What a pity. Zhang Longxiang. He could have become a great talent, but who knew that he would be full of complaints and his eyes would be filled with hatred, making the artistic conception of the three poems worse than the previous one. So what if he has a good phrase? So what if he is angry? If he loses his artistic conception, he would only be going astray and losing his integrity. "
Wei Changxian immediately said, "Marquis Lumen is right. Looking at the three poems, they are extreme but not correct, angry but not impassioned, and hard words but not gentle. The three poems are good poems, but they are only good poems. They can only be said to be bizarre and coincidental. A true master of poetry would definitely be able to control them freely. Zhang Longxiang's poems are bold and unrestrained, but as Marquis Lumen said, they are going astray and cannot be controlled. What a pity. The three poems are lonely and angry like a defeated dog. How can they have the ambition to become a Marquis? "
The scholars present immediately recalled the three poems.
"Poetry Addict Old Man, what do you think?" The Ganzhou prefectural magistrate asked.
Poetry Addict Old Man gently shook his head and said, "Old Man doesn't want to admit it, but I have to say that Marquis Lumen is shrewd and ruthless. If we only talk about each poem, there are no flaws. A poem is a world, a word is a universe. 'The First Lumen Army' is satire, 'The Second Lumen Army' is grief and indignation, and 'The Third Lumen Army' is criticism. Poems are like swords, how can they be compared to swords and spears? But if we talk about the author based on the three poems, there is still a long way to go before he can become a master of poetry. However, Marquis of Zhujiang has just been released from prison, and his grief and indignation cannot be dispelled. It is understandable. After three to five years, after some polishing, he will definitely become a master of poetry. "
Although many people felt that it was a pity, they still nodded lightly. Everything was as bad as falling short, and poetry was the same. No matter how great a poet was, if he only complained every day and attacked others every day, not knowing how to be firm in his ambition and not thinking about his great ambitions, then his reputation would drop greatly.
Generally, the poems of famous masters of poetry were not only about romance, grief, indignation, and complaint, but also about the power to move forward.
The Ganzhou prefectural magistrate said, "Put yourself in his shoes. If we were imprisoned for ten years, the three words' grief and indignation poem 'would only occupy the first two words."
Everyone chuckled.
Wei Changxian let out a long sigh of relief. He had finally beaten down Zhang Longxiang's arrogance, so he smiled and said, "It's late, let's end the banquet, I …"
"'Midnight Song * Four Lumen Army'!"
The same voice spread throughout Ganzhou City for the fourth time. Wei Changxian could no longer control himself and slammed the table, causing the cups and plates to shake.
"Is there an end to this?!" Wei Changxian roared.
However, his voice did not suppress the spring thunder that followed.
"Below Yugutai, the clear river, how many people cry?
Looking at Chang 'an from the northwest, there are countless pitiful mountains.
The green hills cannot cover it, after all, it flows to the east.
Jiang Wan is worried, deep in the mountains I hear partridges. "
Yugutai was within Ganzhou, and there was a clear river flowing next to it. When the first sentence was heard, the people of Ganzhou City were immediately attracted.
The banquet was quiet, and many scholars were shocked. Just now, many people were criticizing Zhang Longxiang for being extreme, but when this poem was heard, it shattered all of their criticism.
The old man laughed heartily and said, "Hahaha … Old Man's eyes are blind! Although the first three poems are not bad, the comparison method of this poem can be said to be the best in the world, and it is deeply influenced by the Book of Songs. Once this poem is out, few people will dare to try the 'Midnight Song' poem! "
The Ganzhou prefectural magistrate slapped his thigh and said, "This official's eyes are even more blind. When I heard this poem, I only felt that 'looking at Chang' an from the northwest, countless mountains are pitiful ', and its artistic conception is at the top of the four poems. However, after hearing the old man's words, I suddenly understood. The Book of Songs has six meanings, and there are three poetic forms: wind, elegance, and praise. There are also three expressive methods: fu, comparison, and exposition. Although this poem does not have the irony of 'directly treating Ganzhou as Liuzhou', nor does it have the grief and indignation of 'a lowly position dares not forget to worry about the country', nor does it have the solemn and stirring feeling of 'a general's success is built on ten thousand withered bones', but if you look carefully, this poem is divided into four large sentences, and each sentence has its own scenery and comparison! This poem's technique is marvelous, the scene is harmonious, and the artistic conception is profound. It is rarely seen in the world! "
Fu is laid out in rows, comparison is used as a metaphor, and exposition is used to express one's feelings.
Everyone picked up their brushes and wrote. Some people even pushed their cups and plates to the ground and bent over to write the poem, wanting to see the specific analysis of the poem.
Everyone wrote and commented at the same time, and the banquet was incomparably noisy.
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