Yes, there are only a few chapters left before the first volume ends.
Personally, I'm not very satisfied with the first volume.
First of all, I made a common mistake at the beginning of the book, throwing out a lot of unlikable settings.
Then there's the problem with the writing. Some readers feel that there's too much nonsense and long-winded. I admit that, so I've reflected on it and tried to simplify the writing.
Actually, this problem is because when I'm writing, I always want to explain everything clearly to everyone. I'm afraid that the readers will have doubts. For example, I want to explain every decision that the characters make. But in fact, most of the time, I don't need to explain it. You can understand it too. Even after I explain it, it doesn't feel that way.
The biggest lesson I learned from this was that most of the time, an author can't write everything in a book. In fact, whether it's for the reader or the author, it's much more interesting to let the reader imagine and figure out the plot for themselves rather than having the author write everything.
The last big problem was the setting of the game.
The settings are all set in advance, but the situation is that some settings should be fine in my expectations, but after dozens of chapters, I suddenly feel that they're not suitable.
For example, the skill Heaven's Eye. Maybe some people noticed that I basically stopped writing towards the end. It's not that I forgot, but that this skill is too buggy.
The reason why he first set up this skill was to keep a trump card for himself. As long as he had this skill, it meant that the disguise of an Underworld cultivator would be useless in front of Lu Qingshan. There would be no such thing as a bottleneck. (And there's a lot of words on the Information Panel ~)
Later on, as I wrote, I realized that it was indeed easy to write, but the story also became boring.
I still hope that Lu Qingshan can use his own brain to solve problems and not rely on this kind of brainless skill. So, I can only use the Spring and Autumn Annals method to silently weaken this skill. (Everyone, just think that this skill was removed because it's too strong …)
While I'm at it, I'll explain the more controversial parts of the book.
First, Lu Qingshan's legendary talent, [Natural Sword Seed]. Many people feel that it's too weak and can't be called a legendary talent.
In fact, in my settings, this talent is really very strong, but it's more hidden than in the data. But that's all I can explain for now, because if I continue, it'll be a spoiler.
The power of the [Natural Sword Seed] would be reflected in the second volume.
As for the main storyline of the second volume, attentive readers should be able to guess what it was. After all, there were quite a lot of hints. Even the Weeping Soul Sword was killed by the plot.
The other thing was the setting of attributes. In short, attributes were not important. From the very beginning, attributes were only used to differentiate the six classes, so there was no need to think about why Sword Cultivators were of the Strength attribute.
Also, some readers feel that there are too many female characters in the book? Actually, there was no need for that at all. These female characters were not female protagonists. They were just female characters in the plot. Why should everyone care? No one would complain about having too many male characters. Why would they complain about having too many female characters?
After all, this is my first book, and there are still a lot of problems, so I won't go into detail for the time being.
If I go back and look at the previous chapters, I'll find that there are many things that need to be corrected, from small things like the wording and sentences to big things like the setting of the plot.
But in my opinion, this was a good thing. After all, being able to discover my previous shortcomings meant that I was improving.
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Next is the matter of getting the book on the shelves. The book will be on the shelves on May 1st, which is tomorrow. As usual, I would like to thank the editor for signing this book.
Then, I hope that everyone who has the ability to support the subscription. If you are still a student or don't have enough money, it's understandable that you can't fully subscribe. Try your best to support the initial subscription. After all, the initial subscription is only ten cents.
Finally, I'll talk about the update. I haven't been updating much. Other than being lazy and delaying, there are indeed objective difficulties.
First, this is my first book. I have no prior experience in writing and am not used to the rhythm of writing web novels. When I write, I get tangled up easily. I often edit and change small things like words, sentences, sentence order, and tone for half a day, wasting a lot of time.
Secondly, because I'm a graduate, it's really difficult for me to focus on writing my thesis, employment, and other trivial matters. In the coming months, I still have to face miscellaneous matters such as the oral defense in May and June. Therefore, I might not be able to update quickly for the time being. I apologize to everyone here first. After this period of time, I will work hard to update!
Lastly, although there are still a lot of problems, I will definitely continue to correct and improve. Thank you for your tolerance and support. Bow!
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