In other words, Overwatch had finally come to an end.
I don't want to say whether it was a success or not, but at least this story is still what I wanted to tell. But to be honest, Overwatch has received a lot of criticism, to the point where I almost wanted to give up. But I still persisted, at least to tell this story completely.
If the first chapter of "Overwatch" was a war revolving around the core of Black Sun, then the second chapter of "Overwatch" was a series of conspiracies revolving around Peacock and Ryuya Shimada. So, in reality, the second part has much less big scenes.
Moreover, this part also exposed a lot of my problems, in terms of writing style, writing style, and experience. If I were to write Overwatch again, I would probably be able to reduce the number of words by about a third. Because when I read this part again, I really felt that the amount of information in each chapter was too little.
This made me feel that many parts of the plot couldn't be pushed forward, and it was very tiring to write it myself. So, there are too many areas that I still need to improve in this area. Only then did I realize that as a master, Jin Yong could describe a wuxia painting with ups and downs in a few hundred thousand words, but I could only write one stage in a few hundred thousand words. The difference was too big.
But, the reason why the second part of Overwatch is so long is because there are too many characters described in it. Among the Ten Ninjas, other than the Fourth Soldier and the Sixth Soldier, the others have some space to describe. This made me struggle between wanting to shorten the length of the story and wanting to write the complete plot. So, in the end, many things couldn't be written.
For example, I originally wanted Hanzo and Genji to fall in love with Peacock at the same time, and then there would be a conflict. But in the end, this plot ended after Genji confessed to Peacock, because if this plot continued, it really wouldn't be able to stop.
So, in conclusion, I am very satisfied with the first part of Overwatch, it was quite compact. I can only say that I am very satisfied with the plot design of Overwatch, but I thought too much, or even too much, making this chapter too scattered, too slow.
So, I need to make my words concise, this is the first thing I need to improve. In addition, I need to avoid the way Overwatch has too many clues in the future plot design. This was the second area that needed improvement.
But in the second half of Overwatch, I'm quite satisfied with the characters I created. Peacock's Nine Soldiers and Ten Soldiers, as well as Ryuya Shimada and Zhang Feng. I also spent a lot of ink and brush to portray their personalities. In the end, their characteristics became more distinct.
Then there was the question of D.VA.
In fact, giving bento to D.VA was decided a long time ago. She was definitely a woman who would appear in the early stages of Tang Yu, because in the later stages, her ability would be very awkward.
In terms of multitasking, reaction speed, and operating speed, could it compare to a computer? In fact, after Tang Yu installed a photon computer in his head, his combat power far surpassed that of D.VA. Under such a situation, I still had to take care of D.VA's appearances and let her have some achievements so that she wouldn't become a vase. It was really difficult.
So, I can imagine how awkward it would be for D.VA to be brought back as an 'L'. The most likely result would be a sweet "Hubby, you're back!" every time she returned home, and then start having RBQ.
If I left her in the world ten years ago, it would be a very cruel thing to do. Because she would see another D.VA slowly grow up, enjoy a happy life that she didn't have, become a big star, and take away all of her previous glory. That feeling was scarier than killing her.
So, D.VA disappeared, but some of her memories affected the D.VA in this timeline. To some extent, the two merged into one, which was the best result.
Then, that's all I want to say about Overwatch. Philips blades, give me a dozen.
…
Then, it was time for the extras to appear on screen!!
Character 1: Hank
Actor: Book Friend – Uncle Zhang
Mirror: That's why Uncle Zhang is acting as Hank! He became Soldier 77 in the first part of Overwatch, and also stood firmly behind Jack Morrison! He appeared in the Battle of Sejong City Laboratory and the Battle of Incheon. He didn't have many scenes in the second part, but he did his duty to protect Special Envoy Rogge. Do you have anything to say about this part of Overwatch's journey?
Uncle Zhang: "I just can't accept that this is the only main character in Operation Raccoon City. The other Resident Evil series are just bystanders. That's why I suggested to the author to add a cameo. I'm also very satisfied with Blizzard's Overwatch, so I've always wanted to explore its background story. It's a pity that when Blizzard released this game, it was only a test for an FPS game. The background story was limited to a small part of the description of each character. Furthermore, there aren't any official novels or comics about Overwatch. Thank you, Mr. Zhang, for giving me this opportunity to make up for some of my regrets.
Mirror: "So, this Hank is based on the fourth survivor in Resident Evil 2, Grim Reaper Hank!" But because of the plot, this character is more like a veteran. It's still different from the image of Grim Reaper Hank.
Uncle Zhang: It doesn't matter. At that time, I had to choose between the Delta Special Forces and Hank for a long time before giving Hank the answer. He was very happy to be able to participate in this plot!
… …
Character 2: Zhang Feng
Played by: Book Friend — Arms Detroit
Little Mirror: Then there's Matsushima Kaede, oh no, Zhang Feng's words ~ ~ ~ As such a big bad guy, what are his thoughts?
Munitions Detroit: "I was originally content with being a minor character, but now I've suddenly become a villain in a world with a storyline. I have a good impression of the author's design of Peacock and his own innovation. After all, reasonable innovation is what makes the infinite genre interesting."
Mirror: But I'm asking Zhang Feng!
Arms Fire Detroit: "My evaluation of my side character is that I'm a very normal villain, but I can feel the deep malice in Zhang Feng's ending. Haha, but I'm still very happy to be able to read a novel that I participated in. I will always support the author.
… …
Character 3: Martin Helaf
Played by: Book Friend — Asphyxia — Suffocation
… …
Character 4: Zhou Qing
Actor: Book Friend — Zhou Youqing
… …
The interviews for the above two characters will be played after they organize their words!
Then, "Infinite Legendary Mechanic" is about to enter the next chapter, the advancement battle!
You've already exceeded your reading limit for today. If you want to read more, please log in.
Login
Select text and click 'Report' to let us know about any bad translation.
