Tang En slammed the table and threw back the manuscripts handed in by a beautiful Elven girl. He shouted, "No! Unqualified! Send them back and rewrite! Remember! Three golden chapters! Three golden chapters! "
Tang En's roar scared the beautiful Elven girl in front of him. Her ears drooped, and she shrunk her neck and lowered her head in embarrassment.
She was a very popular poet in Jade Corolla, and the poems she wrote were very popular with her sisters. She thought that she could easily complete Tang En's task and confidently submit her new work, but she did not expect that she would fail.
"Do you still not understand what three golden chapters are?! I'll explain it to you again! It means that the protagonist, the conflict, the explosion, and the goal must appear in the first three chapters. If necessary, you have to write a cheat. There is only one purpose, and that is to make the readers feel good! "
"But without foreshadowing," the Elven girl explained in a low voice, "there is no story at all …"
"There is no need for a story! The readers don't care about the story, they are very impatient! They only need to feel good! Good, good, good, good, good, that is enough! "
Tang En slammed the table and shouted, "But look at what you wrote? Ah? 'The morning light dispels the fog, the girl walks on the waves, the goddess descends the hymn, evil will be purified'? Are you kidding me? Plain language, plain language, do you understand? "
The beautiful Elven poet trembled and hurriedly shook her head. She looked at Tang En with her big watery eyes.
"From the main point of view, you wrote a story about a female protagonist. Just this point alone is enough to kill you!"
"The first page only has these four sentences. From the style of writing, although it is concise enough, there is no sense of rhythm. What about the name of the protagonist? The protagonist walks on the waves, what is the purpose? The goddess descends the holy light, what is it for? Giving a cheat? Or a blessing? Or to strengthen the protagonist's body? You didn't write it clearly! And the last sentence, isn't it nonsense? Everyone knows that evil will definitely lose in the end, so the readers don't care about this. They care about how the protagonist slaps the face, how to show off, and how to feel good! "
"Let me repeat your four sentences in the correct way so that you can experience them."
Tang En thought for a while. Under the beautiful Elven poet's gaze, he slowly said, "It is dawn, our protagonist A wakes up at home on time, and then he quickly climbs to the window on the second floor. The young and beautiful girl B next door starts to bathe as usual. Depending on the age limit of the work, this paragraph can be further refined or simplified. After bathing, a holy light suddenly, the goddess discovered A is peeking at her bathing, so she wants to punish him!"
"But, who is A? He is the protagonist of the story! Therefore, even the goddess has to kneel down! Under the attack of the main character's glib tongue, the goddess returned with satisfaction. Before she left, she gave the main character A a big gift pack, which strengthened his power, purified his body, taught him several skills, and gave him a mission. The evil Z was about to awaken, and in order to save the world, he had to bring his childhood sweetheart B with him to save the world. Why did he have to bring B with him? As the protagonist, he needs someone to warm his bed at night. "
"Then, the main character went to look for B, but unexpectedly met the villain C, who had always been secretly in love with B. C mocked the main character A and tried his best to draw hatred. Then, A slapped C to death, successfully slapping his face, and obtained his childhood sweetheart B. Then, he brought B along to save the world and began the path of exorcism. Along the way, they defeated enemy D, subdued beauty E, defeated enemy F, subdued beauty G …"
Speaking of this, Tang En spread his hands. "See, isn't it better to write like this? Also, use the vernacular! Do you understand the vernacular? Just say it directly, don't beat around the bush, just say what you want to say. "
"Oh …"
The beautiful Elven poet nodded as if she understood. "In short, defeat the enemy and collect the beauties?"
"You are smart! What's your name? "
Although her writing was very average, she was the first to have the courage to submit her manuscript. She could be a key person to be trained, so Tang En put in so much effort.
"Dantleian."
"…"
Tang En was silent for a moment, then said earnestly, "If you have time, look through your bookshelves. Maybe you will awaken some strange attributes."
Dantleian was confused.
"Go back and change it. Remember, our main readers are men, so we have to write this story from the perspective of men. As for the story from the perspective of women, that's a matter for the future."
What Izari wanted was to increase the population of the elves. If men did not have such thoughts, how could they increase the population? At this time, of course, they had to develop some corresponding literary works. Long Aotian, who had activated his stud mode, fit the requirements perfectly!
"Oh …"
Dantleian hesitated for a moment, then asked in a low voice, "Tang En, the world you mentioned before … do you have any reference materials?"
Tang En's eyes lit up. "You're interested?"
"Yes …"
Danterian nodded. "I have a feeling that the story you told me is not a fictional story. It feels like a real world. If I have the reference material, I should be able to write a story that will satisfy you."
"It's not to satisfy me, I'm just giving you inspiration."
Tang En corrected her. "The story you write will eventually be read by Queen Izari."
After that, Tang En smiled again. "But it's a bit too difficult for you to write this kind of story directly, so …"
Tang En waved his hand, took out a stack of paper, and said proudly, "This is the story outline I wrote for you last night. You can take it and read it separately to learn."
"Great!"
Dantleian's eyes lit up. She took the outline and said confidently, "Don't worry, I swear in the name of the Goddess, I will — I will definitely write this thing called a novel well!"
"You really can be taught …"
Watching Dantleian leave, Tang En said, "Next."
A blonde elven girl confidently handed over the manuscript in her hand. "This is the comic I drew."
"Oh."
Tang En just rolled his eyes and took a deep breath. "What's your name?"
"Three —"
The corners of Tang En's eyes twitched. Don't tell me she's called the Three-Thousand Nunnery …
"Three Leaves."
The elven girl, Three Leaves, happily pointed at the hair ornament on her head and said, "Because the seed that was born with me left behind three leaves."
"Phew."
Tang En breathed a sigh of relief. "Three Leaves … That …"
"Hmm?"
"You … This isn't a comic …"
Tang En held the few pieces of paper, his hands trembling. "This is a sketch …"
The few manuscripts that Three Leaves brought over had no problems with the storyboard, story, and rhythm. Apart from the story still not jumping out of the Prandal circle, everything else was impeccable. It could even be said that even if it was brought to Earth, it would instantly become a hit — because her drawing skills were too frightening!
This was not a comic at all, but a sketch!
Every character in every grid, every detail, every leaf on every tree, and even every blade of grass could be clearly seen!
It was already too realistic!
"Aren't you tired drawing like this? How long did it take? "
"No, it didn't take long. It's quite fast to use magic to improve it."
Three Leaves had a faint smile on her face. "It's just the time for a meal. The main thing is that it takes a bit of time to come up with the story, but drawing doesn't take much time."
He had found a treasure!
Tang En was ecstatic. Jin Zhengji on Earth was nothing! This Three Leaves was practically a Prandal human flesh printer!
"That's great!"
Tang En grabbed her hands. "Apart from this style, can you master any other style? Exaggerated? What a joke! Simple? "
Three Leaves was a little unsure. "It should be fine …"
"Okay!"
Tang En finally saw hope. "From now on, you'll be the artist of the official comic!"
Three Leaves was stunned. "What's an official comic?"
"I'll tell you in the future."
Tang En chuckled and patted her shoulder. "In the future, leave the matter of coming up with the story to others. All you have to do is to draw the original draft. I believe that Queen Isari and Aiguin will be very happy to know your contribution."
"It's my pleasure."
After watching Three Leaves leave, Tang En rubbed his hands. He was a little impatient.
From the current learning speed, they would still be bound by Prandal's inertia for a short period of time. It would be difficult for them to display their true strength. If he wanted to come up with something that would satisfy Isari, Tang En had to do it himself.
However, he was not good at drawing or writing.
Therefore, Tang En had other ideas.
If he wanted to see the results immediately, the best way was to personally guide them and let them complete their first work under his guidance. Then, they would understand what the market wanted.
The outline that Tang En gave them was the first step. Next, Tang En decided to take out the outline. Not only that, there were some very … well, adult things in it. Anyway, it was what Isari wanted, so he did not feel any pressure to take it out. However, when he thought about how he had to train those silly elven beauties to create these things, Tang En felt an inexplicable sense of excitement.
What did he take out?
Of course, it was the sex education teacher on Earth. They were all famous works. As long as the original framework was modified and the heavy content was removed, some gentler works would be born.
If the text alone wasn't enough, San Ye's ghostly drawing skills were absolutely sharp. The effect of putting them together was self-evident.
It could be expected that these things would definitely stimulate the elves' needs in some way.
Of course, perhaps because of the elves' naivety, they might awaken more slowly. However, what Tang En wanted to do was awaken their consciousness step by step. As long as they started to awaken, what happened next would have nothing to do with him.
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