Chapter 248
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I almost didn't write any reviews, but since you said that writing a review is also a form of support, I will say the following words.
Longan, your Fu Yao is really good. The characters are detailed and lively, the language is humorous, and the plot is exciting. You are so hardworking, and we all love you. Compared to Empress Phoenix, everyone's faces leave a deeper impression. In terms of character, I like Su Xuan a lot, but Fu Yao doesn't have any special favorites. "Yan Qing" was relatively young (romance + wuxia). All three books are very good. But there are some regrets. It is a pity that the protagonists are gods and not humans. If everything goes smoothly, the story will become a legend.
Please forgive me for comparing your novel to Dong 'er's. I know that such a comparison is very annoying. Your characteristics are different from Dong 'er's, and we don't want them to be the same. If they are, it will be meaningless. I followed Dong 'er's novel and saw that it hasn't been updated for a long time. Then, I saw everyone's recommendations for you from other people's comments. Your plot is more realistic, but Dong 'er's 9 is too fantastical. Her Military Fire seems to be abandoned. You are simple, generous, and have a grand idea. Dong 'er is meticulous, emotional, and gorgeous.
There are some things you can learn from each other.
You can learn from 9's detailed description of emotions, such as the feeling of letting go. I still have to face it in the end!
Chu Li lowered his head to look at her. She was indeed very beautiful today. Although they had met long ago, it was only at this moment that he could look at her seriously. Her eyes were curved, and it was a happy smile, unlike when she was by his side, her brows were always furrowed. She was wearing a gorgeous palace dress, and she was eye-catching. She wasn't wearing a military uniform when she was by his side. She wasn't trying to deceive him or others. She could marry that person openly in front of the whole world. She could enjoy the worship of the people and the congratulations of the entire family. She wasn't like when she was by his side. She would sneak in through the back door and stay in the palace coldly. She even had to live in the cold and dilapidated palace with the name of a dissolute concubine.
She should be happy. That person did it better than her!
Many times, he thought that perhaps, all of this had never happened, just like when he left for six years. Only when he walked out would he be able to see that smile that he missed dearly.
There were a lot of psychological monologues like these, which were very detailed and made people empathize with them. It was very touching for the readers. 9 The whole story is flawed, but the description of emotion is moving in many places. If Fei Huan in "Emperor Phoenix" let the readers see more of his heart, I believe that he will greatly increase the votes for him to be the dream lover of many women.
I can use the 11 beautiful scenes as a reference. When my favorite Li Ce died, Chu Qiao missed him. The whole chapter was like a movie, with short and short scenes alternating. Memories of the current situation intersected, recreating the sadness of the country of flowers and warmth.
Chu Qiao's life was not always smooth sailing or invincible. She was constantly met with setbacks, and many times, she hid alone to heal her wounds and relieve the pain. But we felt close to her, and she behaved more like our lives. We will not always succeed, we will always lick our wounds and move forward. This arrangement makes it easier for the reader to empathize.
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