"If that's the case, then it makes sense. I may come back often in the future. Now that Hogwarts no longer has any restrictions on me, I can leave at any time. So, in order to carry out the plan perfectly and to understand your situation, I will come back every once in a while. There are some things that I can't tell you now, but I can only tell you when I'm done. But with your current progress, it will probably take you a while to write the next two years."
"Of course I know that."
Joanne sat up and carefully placed the manuscript that Jon handed to her on her lap.
"But this time I asked you to come because I have encountered some difficulties in writing the manuscript. There are some things that I need to discuss with you before I can continue, such as this paragraph."
She pointed at the plot where Sirius appeared. "But you have indeed been away for so long. Do you know more or less about these things?"
"Don't worry. Not only do I have the text file, but I also have someone to narrate it to me. So, I know more about these things than you do."
Most importantly, he had read the original work and had a rough idea of what happened in this place.
The current situation was very strange. Joanne was the one who wrote the manuscript, and he was more like an editor, here to give Joanne pointers on how to edit every step.
This role change was indeed a little fast.
"From my point of view, I think you don't have to worry about horizontal problems at all because this story takes place in the real world. All the key points of this story are real. You don't have to worry about the overall logic of this story. This logic will definitely be self-consistent in the real world. You just have to deal with the beginning and end of each story. To put it bluntly, if you write a book based on the concept of Hogwarts, what do you think is the most important thing?"
"Hogwarts is a school. Of course, one story per year."
"That's right. We have to hold on to the identity of a student, because you have to know that this story of yours is not only for the people of the magical world, but also for a greater purpose in the Muggle society. You and I know what this purpose is, so there's no need to say it out loud. But in order for the Muggle Society to accept such a literary work, you first have to give them a great reason, and it's best to do so from the perspective of a student.
In this world, money from a child is the easiest to earn.
As long as this story is slightly like a beautiful fairy tale, with a complete plot and exciting ups and downs, that's enough.
Oh, yes, the story first has to be linked to what Dumbledore often said, which is love.
You can write a separate story for each school year, and then use the story of these seven years to string together. This way, the story will be complete, right? "
Especially since the book had not been released yet, there was still a lot of room for changes. The connection between the two books had to be made faintly discernible. It seemed like there was no relationship, but there had to be a connection between foreshadowing and feedback.
These things did not need to be specifically mentioned by Jon, because as a writer, Joanne must have a very high understanding of literary creation.
If she did not have sufficient preparation in this regard, she would not have told Jon such a plan in the beginning.
"Compared to the completeness of the entire story, the perfection of the worldview isn't that important. This is because the worldview of the story we have constructed is based on the real world. This worldview is naturally complete, and we don't need to deliberately construct anything. After we break the barrier of this world, it will definitely trigger a frenzy. And in the face of such a frenzy, the worldview of the book isn't that important."
Who would care about whether the worldview of a biographical book based on the real world was complete or not?
Joanne nodded, but she did not fully understand. She remembered these things in her mind, and she probably needed some time to digest them.
But they still had time, so they were not in a hurry.
"There is one more thing that is more important, and that is if possible, delete as much as possible. I don't mean the things that are related to me, but the things in this story. Delete as much as you can.
At the end of the day, it is not a true biography. We still have to consider it from the perspective of its dissemination.
The requirements for the story are relatively simple, you just have to write a complete story.
This is the story of an academy, a few students, a black devil, and the struggle between good and evil. There is no need to spend so much time to create the enmity between them, they are natural opposites, and hatred is enough to make up for all the enmity and other things. "
"Regarding Voldemort's love and love, there is no need to create so much based on the gossip. We can make him seem right, but not right, and leave some space for the readers to imagine. After all, by the time this book is released, he will already be dead."
For a dead person, there is no way to verify anything, because there is no proof, and the best ending for this person is to live in the imagination of others. A thousand readers will naturally have a thousand Hamlets in their hearts, so why can't a thousand people have a thousand Harry Potters or Voldemort in their hearts?
To be honest, because Harry Potter is a real person, the first one is very difficult to achieve, but after Voldemort is dead, the second one is completely possible.
"If that is the case, then it is not impossible."
Joanne casually pulled out a pen, wrote down the adjustment plan on the back of the manuscript, and added a few lines of remarks at the back.
Jon also knew that these things may not be completely true, especially when it came to the characterization of Voldemort. He needed to lower Voldemort's IQ, but he wasn't too sure how to do it. In the following period of time, his main task was to come up with a relatively complete plan, and then push Voldemort towards their predetermined ending.
This plan not only included Harry and the members of the Phoenix Society, but also included Voldemort, the ultimate villain.
Even Dumbledore wasn't able to completely predict Voldemort's actions, but Chown, who was a cheater, could.
Of course, in a situation where others didn't know that he had a cheat, it was better not to do some things so obviously.
Many things can be attributed to his ability to see through fate, Jon thought.
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