Although Ye Hai's wife, Li Mengyao, supported her husband in trying to portray a female character in a new way, which was to portray a male character in the same way that her husband portrayed a male character, and then insist that it was a female character, and if the male character was originally a handsome guy, then insist that she was a beauty. However, in terms of character, there was not much difference between them.
Despite her support, she still requested her husband to let her have a look at the content before he updated his novel, so that there would not be any more unsightly depictions of female characters.
"My writing has been great recently, especially when I was portraying the character 'Yu Shengfan' from 'Unpleasant Rain', I felt like I was writing with God, as if I could see her appearing in front of me, playing the game 'Eternal War'! I can no longer write her in an exaggerated and fake way, because she really exists! She is a very interesting girl, she fell in love with games because of loneliness, and even mastered multiple languages for the sake of games. She also likes to talk non-stop while playing the game … "Ye Hai said excitedly to his wife as he passed the manuscript to her.
Li Mengyao saw that Ye Hai looked as if he hadn't come out from the world of writing. She couldn't help but believe him a little. In the past, Ye Hai was also in the state of "Inspiration Burst". Every time he was in that state, the speed and efficiency of writing were very high!
Even the quality of his writing had improved. Ye Hai who was good at portraying male characters and game scenes had a more vivid and lifelike character, and that kind of scene could make the readers immersed in the world he was portraying!
If the words written by Rosemary in his normal state were at the level of a Great God, then the words written by Rosemary in his "Inspiration Burst" state would be at the level of a Supreme God. He could easily stir up the emotions of the readers and immerse them into the world that he had created!
Ye Hai handed over the task of releasing the manuscript to his wife, Li Mengyao, and then immersed himself in writing. He wanted to write as much as he could while he was in a good state.
Li Mengyao also had a huge sense of expectation, and in the end, she finished the manuscript in one breath. She could not help but say to her husband who was typing furiously, "Anything else? Anything else? It's not enough! I'm really looking forward to the scene where Lin Feng and Tang Yongkai find out that "Unpleasant Rain" is actually the peerless beauty that they couldn't take their eyes off of. I'm really looking forward to their reactions … "
In the end, the only response she got was Ye Hai's rhythmic typing. Seeing her husband working so hard, a trace of tenderness appeared on her face. She began to look through the drafts again and prepared to correct the typos for her husband.
But what surprised her was that there wasn't a single typo in the 10,000-word manuscript!
Too awesome!
It was truly done in one go!
But what made her even more gratified was the subsequent portrayal of the female character "Yu Shengfan" by her husband. She originally thought that this extremely exaggerated Mary Sue character was hopeless and would not be liked by the readers anymore. But after she finished reading the draft, she felt that this character was very interesting!
Originally, the character image of "Yu Shengfan" was abnormally empty and pale. It looked perfect, but in fact, it was very fake. The behavior of driving a luxury car to the internet cafe could already be criticized by the readers who were more reasonable. The forced explanation at the end could only barely fool the readers. But when Yu Shengfan's real character characteristics were revealed, this "internet addict girl" who loved games and PK seemed to have become amiable and vivid …
And the most adorable part of her was undoubtedly her mouth that could not stop talking. Of course, it was reflected in the game as the word bubbles that would never disappear from her head. If this kind of person appeared in reality and appeared as an opponent in the game, the players would definitely hate this person who liked to talk and taunt non-stop. But when she appeared in the book, it seemed that this "chatterbox" and "venomous tongue" had become an adorable attribute, especially after the readers found out that this person was very likely to become the protagonist's teammate.
The readers who were in the shoes of the protagonist, Lin Feng, would naturally have a good impression of the characters in the protagonist's camp by + 20. In addition, "Yu Shengfan" did not look like a useless teammate. Her operating skills were so strong, and she had not even revealed her full strength. If she could join forces with Lin Feng, how strong would the future "Glory Team" be?
All in all, the subsequent portrayal of "Yu Shengfan" in the draft suddenly increased the anticipation of the entire work. This was because the subsequent portrayal was too exciting. Subconsciously, everyone even forgot about the harsh description at the beginning. They would only remember her identity as a rich missy and the setting that she was proficient in multiple languages. This was simply too convenient for her to scold, taunt, and cause trouble when she went up against the esports teams of other countries in the future!
This Yu Shengfan was a troublemaker girl. She could steadily pull aggro. This way, it would obviously make the plot even more exciting. Yu Shengfan could be responsible for pulling aggro, and Lin Feng, who had a calm and steady personality and liked to hide his edge, would be responsible for dealing damage, slapping faces, and occasionally revealing his edge to show off. Wouldn't that be great?
One was All-Mouthy King, the other was the Strongest King. When the two of them worked together, the picture was too beautiful to look at!
In fact, the setting of "Yu Shengfan" as a lonely girl without any friends was to hint to the readers that once she became a friend, she would definitely do anything for her friend. If "Yu Shengfan" was a man, it would not be strange at all. This kind of "lone wolf" character, whoever could become his friend could turn the "lone wolf" into a "loyal dog". This kind of pattern could be said to be common in novels, and the readers loved it.
Obviously, Ye Hai had already used the method of portraying male characters on "Yu Shengfan". He no longer treated "Yu Shengfan" as a dispensable supporting character, but an important supporting character. He did not even realize that this character setting was not actually done by him, but he thought it was the product of his inspiration. In any case, he was very satisfied with this character and was extremely partial to the first female character he had written with such feelings. He felt that he had finally portrayed a female character with soul!
Regardless of whether the readers were satisfied or not, he must continue to write like this!
No one could stop a creator who was already "intoxicated"!
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