At night, Zhao Youyue had also noticed the exploding book comment section of "The Strongest King". After all, it was the peak time for many readers to read books at night. If they enjoyed the book, they would praise the author in the comment section, or even reward the author directly. If they were not happy with the book, or if they were poisoned, they would, of course, complain about the author.
"What the hell is this female character, 'Yu Shengfan'? Is Master Rosemary going to appoint her as the female protagonist? If that's the case, I will definitely abandon the book, this is too toxic! "
"It's as if I'm looking at the description of a vase lady in an ancient web novel. Master Rosemary, I advise you to save your breath. Don't write any more female characters. It's too embarrassing …"
"Yu Shengfan, get out of" The Strongest King ", or I will definitely abandon the book!"
"Esports doesn't need a girlfriend, I beg Lin Feng to be lonely forever!"
"As an old reader of Master Rosemary, this scene is so familiar. Master Rosemary, just admit it, stop writing about female characters!"
"Seeing that everyone has the same feeling as me, I am relieved. Master Rosemary is really good at writing plots and game descriptions, but this female character's description is really an eyesore …"
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Zhao Youyue looked at the exploding book comment section and could not help but touch her forehead. She could only hope that Rosemary's mental endurance was stronger, and that she would enter "The Strongest King" tonight to save "Yu Shengfan".
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At the same time, Ye Hai was being scolded by his loving wife, Li Mengyao, because she was also his reader, and she loved to read her husband's books.
Li Mengyao usually used her tablet to read books. She pointed at the description of "Yu Shengfan" and scolded Ye Hai, "I say, why did you suddenly come up with the idea to write a female character? You're not good at writing female characters. Why don't you admit it …"
Ye Hai looked embarrassed. He smiled apologetically and said, "Actually, it's not my fault. It's just a cameo that a nouveau riche reader wanted. Look, she has already tipped me 2,000 yuan for this book. She's the number one fan of this book!
Li Mengyao looked at the fan ranking, and the number one fan was indeed a Sect Master with the nickname "Youyue". She not only tipped this book, but also fully subscribed to it. Li Mengyao laughed, "Do you think you have succeeded in pleasing a tycoon reader? It's obvious that you have offended her, to write a cameo like this, I'm afraid you won't get any tipping in the future! "
As Li Mengyao said that, she couldn't help but think of the female protagonist that Ye Hai used her as a model. Although the entrance was not as exaggerated as "Yu Shengfan", the Mary Sue, and the cancer of embarrassment, but the following description really made her want to kick her husband to death. That was definitely a high-level slander, to portray the female protagonist to be so naive and innocent. She knew that her husband probably wanted to emphasize on portraying the female protagonist's kindness and innocence, but when he wrote it, the female protagonist gave people the feeling that she was especially pretentious and annoying. Anyway, it was best not to see it.
So when Li Mengyao's husband expressed that he wanted to write more interactions between the male and female protagonist, to show the beauty of love, she decisively stopped her husband's actions, and almost threatened him with death!
Alright, that was just an exaggeration …
What made Li Mengyao very helpless was that Ye Hai himself didn't seem to realize how bad his portrayal of the female character was, and he even liked to boast to her — Wife, wife, what do you think of my writing? Did I portray you as someone that the readers like?
Like? To hell with liking!
It's already good enough that you don't hate me, but you still like me? Stop dreaming!
Wake up, my great writer Ye!
In the end, under Li Mengyao's strong intervention, the female protagonist who was based on her finally disappeared, and she could finally happily read her book.
Li Mengyao had always been very satisfied with Ye Hai's new work, "The Strongest King", because there were no female characters, and the plot was very exciting, very exciting, and very passionate (gay). The setting of "Eternal War" was also quite novel, after adding online gaming elements, it made the work more fulfilling and attractive. At the same time, she was also looking forward to the main character's eSports part in the later period, waiting for the main character to lead his "All Chinese Class" to fight against the Goryeo eSports team led by the "Great Demon King".
But now, he actually created trouble for her by portraying a female character!
Li Mengyao saw the awkward expression on Ye Hai's face, and could not help but laugh, "Haha, did I get it right?"
Ye Hai took out his phone, opened the chat window between him and Zhao Youyue, and directly showed the chat history to his wife, and said, "This nouveau riche reader's temper is quite good, much better than yours back then."
After reading the chat history, Li Mengyao could not help but sigh, "This Lady Youyue is really rich, tipping you another 100000 Qidian coins just because of a disagreement, and in the end, you ruined her cameo, I'm also speechless! How can you treat the Sect Master so badly? Also, what do you mean by much better than mine back then? She did not know that you were using her as the model to portray 'Yu Shengfan'. Besides, what's the relationship between you and me, of course, I can directly complain to you. She had just become your QQ friend, and she already gave you a tactful opinion, I guess she could not hold it in anymore. "
Ye Hai smiled awkwardly, and then looked at his exploding book comment section, and could not help but feel guilty, "Then should I directly hide this female character, do you have any suggestions?"
Although he said so, in his heart, he had already decided to try using the suggestion given by the Sect Master of "Youyue", as his last struggle. If the readers were still not satisfied, then he would completely resign to his fate, and would never portray female characters again.
"Let's give it a try! Anyway, I will always support you, there's no other way, as your wife, other than playing games with you, doing housework, cooking, and taking care of the kids, I don't know anything about writing books, but I feel that the other party's suggestion might be useful, if it can make up for your shortcomings in portraying female characters, maybe you can take a bigger step on the road of writing! " Li Mengyao smiled, in fact, she already knew her husband's decision, of course, she chose to support him.
Sure enough, Ye Hai slightly let out a sigh of relief, and just held his wife's hand, everything was silent.
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That night, when Zhao Youyue was sleeping, she skillfully opened the "Two Dimensional Gate" in her mind, and entered it.
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