"I'll take a look at the ending first, I'll give you time to consider." Zhao Youyue replied.
Actually, Zhao Youyue's temper came and went quickly. She always maintained the calmness of a saint, that was her style.
She was too lazy to ask Han Leng why he hid it from her. Didn't Su Li pretend to be a male mangaka in the beginning?
According to Su Li, her works were male-oriented. In order to get along well with male readers and listen to their unreserved opinions, she felt that it was useful to pretend to be a male mangaka.
As for youth romance novels, there was no problem with Han Leng pretending to be a female mangaka. If he had revealed his identity from the beginning, Zhao Youyue might not have given her opinion so seriously.
However, it was hard to tell whether "Beautiful April" was male-oriented or female-oriented. It should be male-oriented in nature. Look at how happy the male protagonist was, having a perfect first love, and having a goddess to sacrifice for him …
Zhao Youyue was actually a very forgiving girl. Perhaps only the people she cared about the most could make her angry. For example, her tsundere mother, Wang Hua. Sometimes, she was so angry that she wanted to run away from home!
Obviously, Han Leng had not reached that level yet.
However, she would not let him go just like that. Mistakes must be punished.
Zhao Youyue looked at the ending that Han Leng sent over. Although she had experienced it once in the literary world, it was still very interesting to read the words and observe how she behaved in the literary world.
There was something about Han Leng that Zhao Youyue had always admired, and that was his writing style. He was born with a keen eye for words, and the sentences he wrote were often self-explanatory.
Otherwise, why would "Beautiful April" be called "April is your essay with full marks"?
Some loyal fans had even extracted the wonderful sentences from the novel, and created Leng Zi's classic quotations — —
"My world is silent. It can't accommodate anyone else." This was the mentality of the male protagonist in the early stage. However, Chu Luoxun's music had once again filled his world with beautiful music.
"There is a city in everyone's heart. When you want to escape, you will hide in it. Some people hide for a long time, some hide for a short time, but I have never walked out … This is the city in my heart, and the ruins in others' eyes. " This was obviously the male protagonist who had a psychological shadow in the beginning. However, with Chu Luoxun's help, he finally got over it.
"A lot of people are sad because they want to show everyone that they are sad. In fact, no one in this world can understand another person's sorrow. "
"Compared to those who try to suppress the world with a loud voice, those who make the whole world quiet down to listen to you are more feared." As Han Leng wrote this, he thought of Lady Zhao.
…
The more charming the writing style of a youth novel, the better it was. It was not a web novel, where the selling point was to "show off and slap faces" or "kill monsters to level up". Even its plot was not a selling point. Looking at all the youth novels, there were very few that had an interesting plot. Its real selling point was actually a feeling, a resonance! So sometimes, the more pretentious the writing style, the more readers like it.
If a youth novel could make you sigh, reminisce, or even suddenly feel sad, then it would be a success!
Of course, to achieve this, there must be some meaningful sentences, sentences that could be used in a full marks essay.
As Zhao Youyue lacked this kind of literary talent, she naturally admired Han Leng's literary talent. She could really read his writing slowly, word by word, because it was a kind of enjoyment.
Zhao Youyue almost finished the ending in one breath. The part about Chu Luoxun had perfectly restored her actions in the literary world. She had no objections, it was very perfect, the quality of the writing had reached the peak!
However, the ending of the male and female protagonists made her frown.
Although Zhao Youyue was not good at analyzing articles in depth, she could tell that Gu Yuan was still deeply in love with the female protagonist. He was gentle and considerate to the female protagonist, but he treated her like a family member. His deep yearning for Chu Luoxun had already been revealed through some small details at the end. It made it seem like Chu Luoxun was the one he loved the most.
This was definitely misleading!
Zhao Youyue had experienced everything in the literary world. She knew that Gu Yuan's true love was Lin meiyue. However, when Han Leng wrote it in this way, the problem instantly became complicated. Moreover, Han Leng wrote what happened in the literary world
Was this the horror of literati? The same thing was written in different words, some parts were written more, some parts were ignored, and the meaning was actually different!
This was the so-called "Spring and Autumn Period" writing style.
Other than that, the ending seemed to hint that one day, the truth of Lin meiyue accepting Chu Luoxun's gift and becoming a "genius composer" would be revealed!
This was even more out of line with Zhao Youyue's expectations. As the real body of Chu Luoxun, she was willing to help Lin meiyue. She hoped that Lin meiyue would live a better life, hoping to make up for Lin meiyue's lack of musical talent, hoping that she could become a genius in the eyes of others. In this way, she and Gu Yuan would be even more compatible.
According to Zhao Youyue's plan, this matter should not be exposed for the rest of her life. Even if Lin meiyue could not "compose" any famous songs in the future, she could use the excuse that she had passed her peak to cover it up.
However, once this matter is exposed, Lin meiyue's reputation would definitely be ruined, right?
Moreover, Gu Yuan would definitely not tolerate Lin meiyue's behavior of possessing Chu Luoxun's works. Their beautiful relationship would even be broken because of this!
Even though Chu Luoxun was dead, she seemed to have become the main culprit of the breakdown of the relationship between the male and female protagonists
Of course, Zhao Youyue, who was a veteran fan of Lin meiyue, would definitely be very unhappy. She had always hoped that the male and female protagonists could be together, and live a harmonious and loving life.
However, because Han Leng had deliberately learned some parts for free, Chu Luoxun was suspected to be a "mistress." Lin meiyue, on the other hand, had calmly possessed Chu Luoxun's original songs out of love, which seemed to be a "bitch."
Before this, Zhao Youyue did not think too much about it. Now, she finally realized Han Leng's sinister intentions!
The ending seemed to be very happy, but in fact, with a little thought, one would understand that the future of the male and female protagonists was very difficult to predict!
She immediately sent a message to Han Leng, and bluntly said that this ending was not appropriate. If the other party was still Leng Zi, she would definitely be more tactful
However, Han Leng's reply was even faster. He said that he could cross-dress and admit his mistake, but there was no way he could change the ending!
"I just don't understand, why do you always side with Gu Yuan and Lin meiyue? You have been like this since the beginning! Does Chu Luoxun deserve to suffer? "
Han Leng was angry at Lady Zhao for his beloved Goddess Chu!
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