Putting away his messy thoughts, Li Zexuan began to read the article seriously.
Of course, it was undeniable that the title of Li Yu's article was very good. Compared to the later dynasties, the Tang Dynasty was more open. The common people liked to listen to love stories. Li Yu's title alone was enough to attract people to continue reading.
After a while, Li Zexuan finished reading the first article. He nodded, then shook his head. Li Yu was happy to see Li Zexuan nod, but Li Zexuan shook his head again. The smile on Li Yu's face froze.
"Uh, boss, what do you think? Why are you nodding and shaking your head? "
Li Yu asked.
Li Zexuan glanced at Li Yu and said, "I nodded because I think your article title is very good. As for the content, it's not bad!"
"Not bad? Then does Boss think that my content can be written even better? "
Li Yu immediately found the key to the problem from the two adjectives Li Zexuan used.
"Hey, smart!"
Li Zexuan praised, then explained, "I can't deny that the story you chose is very attractive. It's clear from the beginning to the end, but in my opinion, it's not enough."
Li Yu looked at Li Zexuan curiously. Li Zexuan smiled and led Li Yu to the pavilion. As they walked, he said, "Brother Li, don't worry.
"Hehe, Little Fishy, don't be unconvinced. There's a reason why I said that. First of all, your entire article gives people the feeling of looking at flowers on horseback. Your description of the incident is very general, very broad, and very boring. This directly causes your entire story to lack a sense of immersion. You have a good topic, but you don't describe a complete story with characters and emotions. The readers will only feel like they're chewing wax. "
Li Yu held onto the stone table, lowered her head and muttered, "Is it that bad?"
Li Zexuan sat down and smiled, "It's not that bad. The reason why I'm telling you so much today is for your own good. Of course, more accurately, it's because I want you to earn more money. Do you still want to hear more?"
"Yes, yes! Boss, please say it! "
When she heard about money, Li Yu's interest was immediately piqued. The depression she felt from being defeated by Li Zexuan was swept away.
"Hehe, you little brat!"
Li Zexuan couldn't help but laugh. "If I were to write about this topic, I could write at least thirty to forty thousand words and publish it in the newspapers for five to six consecutive issues. You see, the part where the rich Mo Wuque and the peasant Shu Yinglian met, you can write more about how Shu Yinglian was at home and how she was bullied by the village bullies. How helpless and hopeless she was. Also, when Mo Wuque saw Shu Yinglian's peerless beauty, how shocked he was.
Of course, the most important part is the part where Mo Wuque stood up to save Shu Yinglian. You must write in detail. Such an important part, how can you write it all in just two sentences? Your foreshadowing is all for Mo Wuque to act pretentious and slap the face. Ah pui, it's for the hero saving the beauty!
Also, also, when Mo Wuque's father, Mo Yunshan, opposed his son's relationship with Shu Yinglian, why didn't you write about Mo Wuque's conflict, self-blame and helplessness? Shu Yinglian couldn't be with the person she loved and jumped into the river in anger. Why don't you put yourself in Shu Yinglian's shoes and think about her despair, reluctance and tragedy? This is the best place to poke at the reader's tears! You have to write about it properly.
Also, also, after Mo Wuque found out that the woman he loved had jumped into the river, the loneliness, sadness, anger, and finally grief. His heart was like dead ashes, and he went to the temple, shaved his head, and became a monk. You have to embellish this place. These are all words, they are all money! As a reporter, if you don't know how to embellish the word count, pui, if you don't know how to write about a matter, then you won't be able to earn much money … "
Li Zexuan was talking non-stop to Li Yu about how to embellish the news and how to write one story as five stories. He completely forgot that he was the boss of Datang Daily. If Li Yu really did that, she would be scamming his own money.
Li Yu stood at the side and listened with her mouth agape. She really wanted to kneel down to Li Zexuan. What kind of boss would personally teach his employees how to scam their boss's money! Also, Li Zexuan's' embellishment ', ah pui, it was the way to develop the story. It was really an eye-opener for her. It was as if the door to a new world (the path of the Water God) was slowly opening for her.
"Cough cough!"
At this moment, a light cough came from the side. It turned out to be Ma Zhou. He just came out to take a breather and didn't expect to see Li Zexuan giving a 'lecture' to Li Yu. The more he listened, the more he felt that something was wrong. Wasn't this misleading the students? Hence, he quickly interrupted.
"Eh, Brother Ma, you're here?"
Li Zexuan looked at Ma Zhou's expression and knew that he had heard everything he said. He looked a little awkward.
"Hello, Uncle Ma ~!"
Li Yu remembered what Li Zexuan said to her before. "If you have any problems, your Uncle Ma can take care of you." She went up and said sweetly.
"F * ck! Since when did I become an uncle? You were still calling me Steward Ma yesterday! "
Ma Zhou had just taken two steps when he heard Li Yu's words. He instantly staggered and cursed in his heart. If it wasn't for Li Zexuan's quick reaction and raised his hand, he would have fallen flat on his face.
"What's wrong? Is it wrong for the little girl to call you that? Brother Ma, why do you have such a big reaction? "
Li Zexuan teased with a mischievous smile.
Ma Zhou was speechless. What else could he say? He could only curse Li Zexuan in his heart. He was sure that Li Zexuan was the one who taught Li Yu this.
"Is there anything important that Lord Jue came here today?"
Ma Zhou calmed himself down and asked.
"Uh, there's no hurry. Let me finish reading Little Yu 'er's news first. There's still one more! Oh, Brother Ma, you came at the right time. Come and see what Little Yu 'er's news is like! "
Li Zexuan passed the news article that he had just finished reading, "Rich Man Turns to Buddhism for Lover" to Ma Zhou. He then picked up the other news article and started reading.
Ma Zhou was helpless and could only be patient. He sat down and began to watch the news.
"F * ck, f * ck! This little girl is stirring up trouble! "
Li Zexuan almost screamed when he saw the second news article's title. It was because the title was too shocking. It said, "A woman in the wild, after her clothes were stolen by a man …"
Li Zexuan rubbed his nose. It seemed like Li Yu was going to go all out with this title. Sigh, I don't know if it's a blessing or a curse.
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