Chapter 1128
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I didn't go out this month and stayed at home, writing seriously. However, I still encountered something.
Last week, my eyes were a little inflamed, causing the vitreous to turn a little more cloudy. After seeing that ordinary eye drops didn't have any effect, I quickly registered for a doctor. Before I set off, my wife, an ophthalmology graduate, said that it wasn't a big deal. As long as it wasn't a lesion in the eye, it was fine. I asked what lesion in the eye included, and she said macula before forgetting everything else.
When I arrived at the hospital, the doctor said that the vitreous was indeed cloudy, but the shadow was small and could move. There was no flash, so it wasn't a big problem. It's just that your macula doesn't seem too good. Back then, I was so scared that I peed my pants. I immediately made an appointment for a follow-up checkup. I was depressed at home for two days, but thankfully, the checkup said that there were no problems. Just remember to have regular checkups in the future.
Everyone, if you have severe myopia, please remember to take care of your eyes and use them scientifically!
Yes, this month, I've finally advanced the plot to the beginning of the war. I've connected many of the foreshadowing and paved the way for the tense atmosphere. This novel should end in November, or at the latest, in early December.
Considering that the war is a continuous process, it's impossible for it to reach a climax like the Great Smog of Baekeland. There will be many foreshadowing and many tragedies. Therefore, I didn't use the writing method at the end of the second novel. I only slightly exaggerated the atmosphere of the war and the reactions of different people.
This also resulted in the chapter of "Asking Myself" not having enough emotional foreshadowing. Of course, I didn't write that chapter as a climax. To me, it's just a relatively important point in the plot structure. It's important not because it's stirring up the emotions, nor is it because it's to change Klein's aimless state from the beginning of the fifth novel to now. It's to tighten the tension of the plot later on.
Therefore, what I need is clarity and a certain degree of explosive force. It's like a nail being hammered into the plot, tightening the story later on.
With such a goal in mind, I finally used the method of repeated questioning that I originally didn't plan on using in this book. This is because if I were to use an indirect method or a straight line to express it, the points that need to be protruded wouldn't be clear. This would cause the emotions that need to be conveyed later on to be far from enough. If it wasn't for the existence of the previous chapter, the hidden emotions and emotions in my conversation with Bernadette wouldn't have been presented so easily. As for using the method of conversing with other people or objects, I wrote it in the beginning. It was very awkward, many times more awkward than I asked myself.
Of course, because I changed the way I wrote it at the last minute, there were a lot of unnecessary words. At the time, I wanted to let my emotions slowly relax before tightening them. Yep, now that I think about it, going too far is as bad as not going far enough. Sometimes, I have to repeatedly remind myself of the word "control."
As for the war, due to the foreshadowing of the entire style, it's unlikely that Lil 'Ke will directly enter the battlefield. I also don't know how to directly describe the war. At most, I'll highlight two or three battles to achieve the goal of outlining the situation. Following that, Lil' Ke and Bernadette's efforts and the Giant King's Court's plot will intertwine. I hope it'll be written well.
That's the summary for October. Today, the first chapter has been updated. Begging for a guaranteed monthly vote! Vote for me, vote for me, vote for me!
Also, I'm at the top of the monthly votes again in October. Thank you, everyone. This should be the first time I've done it three times in a row. Yes, I'll add more chapters to the latter half of the month. At the critical moment of the plot, I'll ask for monthly votes again ~
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